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Topic Sentences

I would like to see the traditional songs developed in Indonesia, because it can influence Indonesian people to be participations can make Indonesian cultures go international, and rearrangment the music of the songs.

Major Point 1:

The first aspect if traditional songs developed in Indonesia, people can be participations. Making the competitions singing of the traditional songs, playing the traditional songs over the Radio stations and TV, and agrassive promotions.

Major Point 2:

Traditional songs can make the country go international. Introduce Indonesia to other countries, people can be proud to be Indonesian, and more familiar.

Major Point 3:

Traditional songs can be rearrange. People do not boring, the music can be more modern, and make musicians more creative.

Paragraph

Indonesia is a country that is rich in cultures, though many people in Indonesia are still not aware how rich Indonesia is in its cultures, for example the traditional songs. So, i would like to see that the traditional songs developed in Indonesia. The means to develop the traditional songs is through people participation, as follows making the competition to sing the traditional songs. People need to agrassive the promotions, such as making the advertisment in facebook and twitter, so the new generations are also interested. Compilations all of the traditional songs under one CD to be play over the local radio and TV stations. Beside that, if traditional songs are developed in Indonesia, it can go international. We can introduce Indonesia country to other countries by the Indonesian cultures, such as traditional songs. So, we can be proud to be Indonesian, and our cultures can be more familiar to Indonesian as well as overseas. Lastly, the traditional songs music can be rearrange in order to make the people not bored. The music can be arrange to more modern, and make the musicians more creative. All in all, traditional songs are important to be developed in Indonesia to sustain the cultures of Indonesia and to gain the respect of the new generations.